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there gonna clean up yur looks with all the lies and the books to make a citizen out of you,becuase they sleep with a gun and keep an eye on yur son and watch every single thing that you do,becuase the drugs never work there gonna give u a smerk theyve got methods of keeping u clean,there gonna rip off yur heads yur parations to sheards another in the murder machine,[next the chorus],they said all teenagers scare the living **** of me tthey could less as long as some1 will bleed to darken yur clothes or strike a violet pose,maybe theyll leave u alone but not me,[end of chorus]the boys and girls in the clink are gonna bleed in the sink after,after they blow yur fingers off,all together now,chorusx2